Monday, August 31, 2015

Arrieta No-NO & The Fan



Arrieta No-No






Bale/ Rodriguez...



From Eduardo Galeano- The Fan


Friday, August 28, 2015

Suspense Sample

Notice the attention to the subtle movements of the matador...
From Last Breaths in the Spanish Bullring

Ungrateful is, of course, ignorant to all of this, panting and bleeding away, glaring only at his nemesis. Tomás’s focus returns to the bull and his expression softens for an instant. Then he leaves the animal waiting in the center of the ring while he calmly paces over to the barrera and is handed his sword. He returns to the bull and holds his cape unfurled down his thigh, his other leg back, then brings the handle of his sword against his cheek to sight the tip of the blade between Ungrateful’s shoulder blades, the kill zone about the size of a silver dollar. The roar of the crowd reaches a crescendo as Tomás stands with the bull in pristine silence.

Tomás remains perfectly still and poised, sword in hand until, suddenly, unexpectedly, he drops it to his side, out of view from the bull. Blood glistens and froths from where the bull has been pierced by the picador’s spear and the dangling banderillas. Tomás then lowers the cape like a shade, an invitation, until the bull obliges and follows it down the point of his horns, bowing his head, unknowingly exposing his most vulnerable area to the sword’s tip. Then, with a jerk of his wrist, Tomás releases the sword and gravity carries it to the ground.

With the same hand, he now reaches over to his cheek and sights the kill in mime as the bull prepares to embrace fate. Tomás tugs at the cape and then springs forward to lance the bull just as it ignites at the same moment toward him. But this is Tomás. He sails over the horns and slaps the bull on the precise location where his death would have arrived. The bull quickly turns around, faces Tomás one last time, an apparition, before the man turns his back, strolls off, then turns and beckons the bull to exit the ring, summoning him from the light to the darkness, from death to the rest of his life.

Then Tomás walks away, back into the ring, alone amid the weeping and the cheers.

Professor U- Round 1


I know I have yapped enough at the start of class but now I want to turn over the sharing to the class.  Think of it as a hive experience.

Sports Vocab-
Not everyone knows this sport and there are elements beauty/grace/courage/brilliance that may be lost on the casual viewer.  Your job is to introduce us to either a term (bean, salary cap, icing) /strategy (West Coast Offense-Rope-a-Dope)/ or historical moment (El Classico, The Drive, Thrilla in Manila, etc) of that game so that we can learn to appreciate your sport with more depth.  To include in the slide:

  • Video of this in action
  • Who was/were/are the best at it?
Get a thumbs up from me before you start.  No repeats!

Sports Controversy-  
Is there a current concern or a long standing debate boiling within your sport?
  • concussions? (Health)
  • rookie contracts, transfer fees? (economics)
  • gambling, fantasy sports?
  • GOAT
  • race/culture/gender (Redskins, Rousey, etc)
  • youth sports
Post the article on the Classroom stream prior to the day you present.  Use the Professor U Round 1 Slide shared with you to share any video/ photos.
The content of your brief presentation should include the following:
  • Background of this issue (25+ ACL injuries, millions in lost revenue/investment)
  • Summary of both sides of the debate (players vs. owners vs. ???)
  • Some proposed solutions to this issue (feel free to comment whether solution is realistic)
  • Why is this interesting to you?


Sign up on this calendar.

Thursday, August 27, 2015

Suspense needs context!

Usain Bolt Wins Easily but Is Run Down by a Segway

Open this


Contextual Details of 2014 :

  • Seahawks repeat Superbowl Champion ( History)
  • Tom Brady 4 SB Victory (Player legacy)
  • Deflate-gate scandal (Scandal)
  • 2014 Scandal plagued year (AP/ Ray Rice) (Public relations)
  • Secular Holiday- Commercials!  Glut of beer & food (Culture)
  • Viewed by millions (Media/Culture)
  • Improbable Patriot rally (Game Drama)
  • 4th Quarter (!!!)
  • 3rd down (!!!!)
  • Goal line (!!!!!)
  • 2 opportunities for Beastmode - Victory all but Guaranteed ( Fait Accompli)
  • Stadium on their feet!
  • And then...
Pouncing on Wilson's throw like a leopard (participial), Malcolm Butler, an undrafted free agent from Western Alabama (appositive), ripped apart Seahawk's dreams of a repeat Super Bowl victory.
                                                       For Friday via Drama/Suspense #1:

  1. Brainstorm a list of 8+ examples of context that help build the drama and narrative of the event.
  2. Draft a paragraph that sets up the drama.  Do not describe the action yet.
Super Bowl 49 emerged from the muck of the NFL's most embarrassing year on record.  Plagued by looming concussion concerns and the shameful off field domestic violence of Adrian Peterson, Ray Rice, Ray McDonald, and Greg Hardy, could the actual game make us remember why we love football so unconditionally?  Almost.  Despite the two weeks of wall to wall media coverage normally covering such insignificant player quirks and foibles and over-hyped narratives, the giggle inducing  PSI gap of Tom Brady's footballs threatened to be the final insult to the once sterling image of America's most popular sport.  The multi-million dollar Hollywood produced commercials might not be enough to make us forgive and forget; however, could the drama of the game itself save this season?

                                                                           ht/ Anthony


Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Knuckleball- Beauty in sport

Let's revisit your your description of player greatness.  Now I want you to write a comparison through an extended metaphor (just add it to last night's writing in Docs).

Some ideas of metaphor:
-lion vs. lion on the Serengeti
-doctor vs. surgeon vs. neurosurgeon
-snake vs.boa constrictor
- painter/ sculptor vs. Michelangelo


From Andrew Sullivan's Post of the documentary Knuckleball.
Scott Tobias
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There are essentially two things that can happen with a knuckleball. It can float toward the plate without spin, jerk around like boozy relatives at a wedding hall and make the world's best hitters look like hapless Looney Tunes characters. Or it can float toward the plate with spin, lope with a steady trajectory at 65 mph and give the world's best hitters the juiciest slab of red meat this side of Sizzler. When a knuckleball specialist is on (adverbial) , he's a magician, conjuring the dark and mysterious forces of the universe (participial) ; when he's off (adverbial), he's the pot-bellied assistant manager throwing batting practice...


Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Witness to Greatness




In his own words...Cold Blooded-Isaiah Thomas


We were tied 1–1 going into the seventy-eighth minute when Rooney misplayed a pass and then, seconds later, got the ball lobbed back to him and pulled off this unbelievable maneuver: With his back to the goal, he jumped a few feet off the ground, wheeled his leg up and over his headnailed the ball, and sent it rocketing into the top-right corner of the net. The sound in the stadium was like a napalm strike, and yes, I did one of those frantic I'm-so-excited-I-don't-know-what-the-****-to-do jumping-hug things with the guy standing next to me. I like to think I ground a few grains of Martin into Old Trafford right then, and that he'll have those crazy-good seats forever.

From GQ

From SI's Photos of the year
Real Madrid's Cristiano Ronaldo attempts to score on a bicycle kick during a La Liga match against Granada.


Let's review sentence types again:

Participial (examples from Grammar Monster)

Placement of Participle Phrases

A participle phrase will often appear at the start of a sentence to describe something in the main clause. For example:
  • Removing his glasses, the professor shook his head with disappointment.
  • (When a sentence is structured this way, use a comma to separate the participle phrase from whatever it's modifying (the professorin this example).)
A participle phrase can also appear immediately after whatever it's modifying. For example:
  • I saw Arthur running for the bus.
  • (There is no comma when a participle phrase is placed immediately after its noun (Arthur in this example).)
It is also possible to use a participle phrase at the end of a clause and not immediately after whatever it's modifying. For example:
  • Paul loved his boxing gloves, wearing them even to bed.
  • (There is a comma when the participle phrase is used farther down the sentence than its noun (Paul in this example).)

Let's also work in with the Appositve-

Appositive- Noun phrases that identify adjacent nouns or pronouns.  They can occur as sentence openers, subject verb splits, or sentence closers.


One of six players on the ice, Toews was a fierce, willful leader.


Messi, a Barca legend, spent the formative years of his live living in Spain, not Argentina.

Other ways of using the appositive- HT to Grammar Monster
  • Jane Smith, who swam 100m in under a minute, wins the award for most improved swimmer. 
  • Jane Smith (who swam 100m in under a minute) wins the award for most improved swimmer. 
  • Jane Smith — who swam 100m in under a minute — wins the award for most improved swimmer. 

For Wednesday:

On Classroom-
Describe the sports legend in action.  

  1. Find a photo/video of your legend in action-paste/embed video in doc
  2. Describe their greatness in action.  Be very creative with your verb choice and your imagery.  Really dig in with your sensory details-sight, sound, touch, smell, (taste).  
  3. Use no less that one example of a participial phrase and appositive in this description.  Underline both.  Feel free to use more than the required amount.
  4. Word Count-250

From NYT profile of David Wright
Wright went on the disabled list April 15 with a hamstring strain. Bothered by lower-back pain in May (participial), he was found to have spinal stenosis, a narrowing of the spinal canal (appositive). In June, Manager Terry Collins said, he thought Wright would be lost for the season.


Sunday, August 23, 2015

What makes a legend?


Greatest Story Ever Bowled...



From Mega Watt
“This might sound strange coming from me, because I’m about as old and as cynical as they come,” said Robertson. “But what J.J. has got is a charisma that you don’t often see these days among professional athletes. He seems to be the real thing—an old-fashioned, down-to-earth hero of sorts who hasn’t let all the fame mess with his head. After that charity softball game, he actually sent me a personal tweet saying, ‘Hey, Dale, thanks for coming out.’ I mean, who does that anymore?”
....
Watt doesn’t just work hard. “J.J. is completely, utterly obsessed,” said Lechler. “I get to the stadium at six-twenty in the morning, and he’s already there, his truck parked in the front row. And while the rest of us go home by three, he usually is there until the evening. Sometimes he’ll text me, asking me where I am, letting me know he is still lifting weights, making himself better, trying to win us a championship.”
In truth, Watt has made one concession to being a very wealthy man. He has begun chartering private jets whenever he needs to take a trip. But there is a practical reason for that, he told me. It saves him from spending several hours in the airport, which makes it far easier to get in his two daily weight workouts. Nothing, of course, gets in the way of Watt’s weight workouts. As he said during a press conference before his charity softball game, “I never want to let a day go by without having done something to get a little better. I want to go out and chase greatness. That’s all I want to do.” -  

Let's read this article together.  Even Brutes Can Learn to Cry- Iceland Strongman
For our research of the attributes of Greatness you need to do a little research.  Find an article/profile of this athlete and find either a quote from the athlete or of someone speaking of their habits or philosophy/ approach to the game.  Post the source and the quote in Classroom.

Friday, August 21, 2015

Weekend Check


                                                         HT/Brian


                                                                     HT/ Ethan

Did I finish...

  • Student Survey
  • Writing Sample (Why we love sports...)
  • Memory #1 draft
For today we are building vocabulary to bank for our writing.  Posted in Classroom will be a doc that will help you filter unique vocabulary to your sport(s) of choice.  You will be adding to this file every week so that you grow accustomed to the language of your sport.  This is a major piece of your improvement as a sports writer is to expand your vocabulary and the sentence variety as well.  Below you will find an except from last night's Yankee game.  Notice what I highlighted were they types of words/expressions that are unique to baseball.  Only pluck the words/expressions that you know will be helpful during your drafting process.  Make your way through 2 articles today of your choice.  Pick rich articles that will display the words you want to draw upon in future writings.  



Joe Girardi was ejected in the ninth inning Thursday as soon as he confronted the plate umpire, Dan Iassogna, about balls and strikes. But Girardi, theYankees’ manager, was in no hurry to leave the field. He tried some performance art first.
Girardi was upset about the strike zone after his cleanup hitter, Brian McCann, struck out looking. After the ejection, Girardi strode away from Iassogna and dug his spikes into the dirt, scratching a line parallel to the plate and well out of the zone. Girardi yelled a little more, for theatrical flair, and then left with an energized crowd behind him.
The Yankees responded with another run, but Didi Gregorius flied to left with runners on second and third to finish a 3-2 loss to the Cleveland Indians.
“I just wanted the strike zone to be right,” Girardi said, mentioning other calls that also bothered him. “I want the strike zone to be the strike zone, and I know they’re not going to be perfect; I understand that. But it’s a real important time.”
The loss shaved a half-game from the Yankees’ lead in the American League East, which now stands at a game and a half over the idle Toronto Blue Jays, who start a road series against the Los Angeles Angels on Friday.
The Yankees have three more games this weekend with the Indians, who arrived in last place in the A.L. Central but have been tougher for the Yankees than Minnesota, Cleveland’s divisional neighbor, has been. The Yankees swept the Twins this week but have now lost three of four this month to the Indians.
The Yankees will miss the reigning A.L. Cy Young Award winner, Corey Kluber, in this series, but they will face other tough right-handers, Carlos Carrasco and Danny Salazar, the next two days. The soft-throwing Josh Tomlin looked like an easier assignment, but he was not.
“He did just enough to keep us in between speeds,” said McCann, who was 0 for 3 against Tomlin before Cody Allen struck him out in the ninth.

Thursday, August 20, 2015

Sports memory + Steph Curry vs. Participial Phrase

                                                             ht/ Dante!

Participial Phrases- Participles (verb phrases) describe nouns or pronouns.  Present participles always end in –ing.  Past participles usually end in –ed.  

Standing there in the middle of the street, Marty suddenly thought of Halloween.

Amazed at the simplicity of it all, I understood everything as never before.

Bullfight 

For Friday:

  1. Be sure to complete "Why We Love Sport" sample via Classroom.
  2. On Classroom...Look back at Lopate’s 3rd paragraph from Why I Remain a Baseball Fan. Think about either your earliest memory or moment of greatest exhilaration (playing or viewing the sport you love). Remember the people, place, and time first. Next lay out the sequence (beginning-middle-end) of that experience. Aim for 2-3 paragraphs so that you can develop some details when we revisit this. We are building a memoir piece bit by bit. 

Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Building memoir- Why I remain a Baseball Fan

As we read Why I Remain a Baseball Fan, I want you to take note of the following in your reading file:

  • 5+ great words (I want you to bank these for later.
  • Write out the best sentence.  (must be complex)
Now- Let's experiment.  Either use the embedded Padlet here or open it up using this link.
I want you to imitate the best sentence.  Write the sentence using either your sport or topic of choice.  


Created with Padlet




Listen to the Freakonomics Podcast I reference in class

Sunday, August 16, 2015

Why do we love sports?

 1) Read today's headlines/complete survey/share a link on Pages to build sources.
 2) Read recent controversy by James Harrison
3)  Writing sample- 250 Words- Why Do We Love Sports?  Access Google Doc via Classroom.